As part of my class work we were all asked to peer assess each others work. We all moved round clockwise and wrote two things we thought that they had done well (on their blog) and something that they would improve on.
After we had assessed everyones work we were allowed to look at what each person had said (see image above). Overall I received pretty positive feedback. Reoccurring things that I had noticed had been said was that my design was well presented and matched the genre of my magazine (fashion) very well. It was also stated that I had done a lot of research into my genre.
Somethings that I needed to improve on were posting regularly and keeping my blog up to date. And finally I was told to include more technology in my blog i.e use prezis to present my work etc.
I have concerns that you have not made any posts bewteen November and now (16 January) you have no update posts at all - pleaes have a look at this and try to rectify this.
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